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Christmas Eve on Spsilon 3

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    This is a little ditty I wrote as a Christmas present for a few friends. They have caught the B5 bug after borrowing my box sets.

    Comments welcomed - please be gentle.
    Last edited by TryTheSpoo; 12-23-2004, 07:50 PM.

  • #2
    Other than a couple minor problems here and there (spelling, and an extra syllable where there shouldn't be one), it's very, very nice. Thanks.
    Last edited by KoshN; 12-25-2004, 12:40 AM.
    Mac Breck (KoshN)
    Warner Brothers is Lucy.
    JMS and we fans are collectively Charlie Brown.
    Babylon 5 is the football.


    • #3
      I had missed the original posting and fogotten to check it.

      It's quite good!!

      The only suggestion I would make is that the verse "G'Kar and Lyta take a ship to the stars..." should be moved next to last, some of the happenings in that verse are out of order where it stands.
      Such... is the respect paid to science that the most absurd opinions may become current, provided they are expressed in language, the sound of which recalls some well-known scientific phrase
      James Clerk Maxwell (1831-79)


      • #4
        Speaking of Christmas Eve...

        That was Thursday night in my church. Today, Friday, is our Christmas.

        Merry Christmas - Happy Christmas.

        Christ is Born! Glorify Him!
        Michael Malloy

        Never forget:

        Moscow; Beslan 2004
        Kosovo: 1999, 2004
        New York City: September 11, 2001
        Smyrna: September 9, 1922
        Armenian Genocide in Turkey: 1915-1917


        • #5

          Thanks for the comments so far.........