Hello everyone,
As IÆm new here, I thought IÆd stir things up and make myself unpopular by getting something off my chest thatÆs been quitely bugging me for a long time:
I really dislike the Deconstruction of Falling Stars.
It seems to me as if jms has just gone down a bullet pointed list of future plot points and wrote a quick scene for a few of them. Anyone can plot out 5 years, 500 years or a thousand years of fictional history (well not ANYONE, but anyone with too much time on their hands). The skill, it seems to me, is in telling it in a well paced, consistent and compelling manner. Babylon 5 did this amazaingly, D. of Falling Starsà well really, why not just publish your rough plot notes? Yes, it tells us lots of cool stuff we didnÆt know and itÆs not that itÆs the worst episode û I just donÆt think it *is* an episode. Compared to Sleeping In Light û which makes my cry every time û this seems like a second rate æfinale substituteÆ completely lacking in any emotion or drama (except, I concede, for the Delen bit).
This is not just a gripe (honest). IÆd love someone to persuade me of its brilliance, to make me see it in a new light. At the moment its an irritating little spot in my subconcious that I have to keep picking at. Please help!
As IÆm new here, I thought IÆd stir things up and make myself unpopular by getting something off my chest thatÆs been quitely bugging me for a long time:
I really dislike the Deconstruction of Falling Stars.
It seems to me as if jms has just gone down a bullet pointed list of future plot points and wrote a quick scene for a few of them. Anyone can plot out 5 years, 500 years or a thousand years of fictional history (well not ANYONE, but anyone with too much time on their hands). The skill, it seems to me, is in telling it in a well paced, consistent and compelling manner. Babylon 5 did this amazaingly, D. of Falling Starsà well really, why not just publish your rough plot notes? Yes, it tells us lots of cool stuff we didnÆt know and itÆs not that itÆs the worst episode û I just donÆt think it *is* an episode. Compared to Sleeping In Light û which makes my cry every time û this seems like a second rate æfinale substituteÆ completely lacking in any emotion or drama (except, I concede, for the Delen bit).
This is not just a gripe (honest). IÆd love someone to persuade me of its brilliance, to make me see it in a new light. At the moment its an irritating little spot in my subconcious that I have to keep picking at. Please help!
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